Comments on: Cereal with Water http://coodaslots.wordpress.com/2006/11/12/cereal-with-water/ The first draft of anything is shit. - Hemingway Wed, 23 Dec 2009 05:03:49 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 By: Madison http://coodaslots.wordpress.com/2006/11/12/cereal-with-water/#comment-95 Madison Thu, 11 Jan 2007 03:41:07 +0000 http://coodaslots.wordpress.com/2006/11/12/cereal-with-water/#comment-95 genius. real genius. genius. real genius.

]]> By: Vi http://coodaslots.wordpress.com/2006/11/12/cereal-with-water/#comment-18 Vi Fri, 24 Nov 2006 19:52:27 +0000 http://coodaslots.wordpress.com/2006/11/12/cereal-with-water/#comment-18 Again, thanks. Do you mind if I blogroll you, or would you rather remain unlinked? Again, thanks. Do you mind if I blogroll you, or would you rather remain unlinked?

]]> By: Vi http://coodaslots.wordpress.com/2006/11/12/cereal-with-water/#comment-17 Vi Thu, 23 Nov 2006 17:56:06 +0000 http://coodaslots.wordpress.com/2006/11/12/cereal-with-water/#comment-17 Oddly, you do make sense. And most of the people that I know directly in life have no idea of my blog's existence, so they will neither notice nor appreciate my efforts. That should not really matter...but strangely enough, it does. And thanks, for what I assume to be a compliment--am not exactly sure what you meant by it being 'quite sharp'. Your writing is...raw, but cultivated. By 'raw', I don't mean that it is not polished, but the fact that it is very bare and to the point--I really like and admire it; wish I could write more directly the way you seem to do so effortlessly. Great imagery, too. Oddly, you do make sense. And most of the people that I know directly in life have no idea of my blog’s existence, so they will neither notice nor appreciate my efforts. That should not really matter…but strangely enough, it does.

And thanks, for what I assume to be a compliment–am not exactly sure what you meant by it being ‘quite sharp’.

Your writing is…raw, but cultivated. By ‘raw’, I don’t mean that it is not polished, but the fact that it is very bare and to the point–I really like and admire it; wish I could write more directly the way you seem to do so effortlessly. Great imagery, too.

]]> By: Vi http://coodaslots.wordpress.com/2006/11/12/cereal-with-water/#comment-16 Vi Wed, 22 Nov 2006 19:29:00 +0000 http://coodaslots.wordpress.com/2006/11/12/cereal-with-water/#comment-16 Maybe things will get easier. Maybe things will get easier.

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